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Writer's pictureLuisa Candela

Why write in rhymes

Why rhymes ?


I am not able to describe

How I feel deep in my heart

hopes and angusties,

Feeling


It’s seems that rhymes can make it very playful

Even if is it not a joyful topic

But without rhymes I feell it becomes boring

A funny rhythm is better,

Can tease your problems

And makes them seem less heavy


And really that’s the problem

Giving too much importance

To so sad circumstances!

And finally don’t pay

To flavour all with tears

World always is Indifferent

People ignore your pain

Like a humdrum refrain…

So , I keep be like a clown,

I take care of my sadness

and live within thist lightness

that helps me dream and play

that makes me feel today

hope and love in my heart

And again my song can start


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Stephen Kingsnorth
Stephen Kingsnorth
22 juin 2023

Well done! I Like it!

J'aime

John Dallison
John Dallison
22 juin 2023

😀 A great poem. I endorse your observations.

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