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Together

Writer: Keith TraylingKeith Trayling


My mind wanders back to when we were both young,

When we were carefree and real life had begun.

Exploring each other; heart racing, such fun.

Together forever, in warm summer sun.

Entwined in embrace, not two, but just one.

A prize for each other we knew we'd both won.

Now that time has gone and years have passed by,

I gaze at you with a glint in my eye.

Still together in that same sun we lie.

Joyous contentment we smile, then we sigh.

But know time will pass; one day I will die.

You are thinking the same; hug me and cry.

When that day comes, no longer together.

Wherever I've gone, I will love you forever



Tried to write my first sonnet. Stuck to the rules but ut just doesn't sound like one

 
 
 

4 commenti


Martin Pickard
Martin Pickard
16 lug 2024

A beautiful love poem. as the pirate said. "They're not rules they're more like guidelines!"

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Alison Blevins
Alison Blevins
06 lug 2024

I agree with Jarlath, its the sentiment that shines in this poem.

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Luisa Candela
Luisa Candela
05 lug 2024

A beautiful poem written by a big heart

Una bellissima poesia scritta da un cuore grande

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Jarlath Busby
Jarlath Busby
04 lug 2024

Personally I wouldn’t worry what you call it - the love shared comes through clearly

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