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Writer's pictureAlice Carroll

Time Will Tell

January Challenge – Time

When having writer’s block, always go to nursery rhymes. It is like playing scales on a piano. It loosens something in the brain. I will not be able to attend Open Mic. So, you all can give your suggestions to improve this poem in the comments section. I wanted two opposite generations to agree digital is better. Unfortunately, the meter fell flat.


TIME WILL TELL


A child learns to tell time


Oh, Mommy dear, I sadly fear

I failed telling time in school this year.

The teacher showed us how to tell time

on an old clock that always runs 10 minutes behind.

“Why can’t we go digital?” I whined.


A Parkie tests for decline in cognition

Oh, daughter dear, I sadly fear

I failed my cognition test.

I missed the section about time.

And didn’t do well on the rest.

I was to draw a clock face with the hands set at two

My mind had writer’s block.

Instead, a smiley face I drew.

“Why can’t we just use a digital clock?”

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Alice would you mind if I posted this to our social media pages?

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I would be honored if you posted this poem. I just happened to see your request. I changed my email and don't have comments forwarded to me. An administrator of this site gave me some feedback to improve the wording. I made edits and was wondering how to post the new and improved poems. Any suggestions?

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Nigel Smith
Nigel Smith
Jan 21

A clever piece and no mistake. I love how this reads Alice, as Ali says, quirky and different and that gets my vote every time. Than you Alice

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Well done Alice, quirky and entertaining, I think your poem works well.👍

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