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The Lost Pair

Writer: Martin PickardMartin Pickard

Woollen hand spiked on a cold iron rail,

Red and yellow and blue and green.

Unfound it sways,

Waving ghostlike in the wind


Once it belonged - one of a pair,

Warmed by small pink fingers,

Warming them in turn.

As a father once held his daughter’s tiny glove

And she held his with trust and love.


Where there was warmth,

Now there is frost.

Carelessly separated -

But which one is lost?

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Beautifully evocative and conjures up the image of the flailing mitten

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like the flailing man. Thanks

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Nigel Smith
Nigel Smith
Feb 06

Lost mitten, good analogy, and well written, balancing sentiment with the questioning mind

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Thanks mate. was worried the analogy was too oblique but wanted to avoid the obvious sentimental

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