I walk through the ancients, the ancestors.
My fingertips touch the paper.
Whispering their names.
I'm walking softly as a breeze,
stirring the ashes and memories.
so many stories,
so many tears , so much laughter.
Kinfolk have left their legacies.
Some wrapped in puzzles or hidden
I find the strands of webs they have left,
begin to weave their tale.,
For those who are to come
I do not feel I am intruding.
The kinfolk give me great warmth and welcome,
knowing they are still remembered.
Debbie this piece evokes “an atmosphere “ to the theme. Your word choices make it feel”gentle“ imagery, “I’m walking softly as a breeze”. It’s beautiful.
well written reads well thank you I enjoyed that
Both gentle and delightful and a little intriguing
Very nice. I've been wandering through Ancestry myself and found stories that are calling out for poems
Lovely subject and lovely writing, there's a certain fascination for a lot of people when pondering the past that made them.