Some love burns so bright it's destructive. Some find a love so perfect, so fierce,
and yet circumstances mean it can only ever be an 'if only'. These are the thoughts
behind the following, written for the challenge. Sonnet 32 - the beautiful cruel
For our twilight time, sing our saddest song,
of these our summer dawns and morning mist
words telling of that which cannot be wrong,
our make-believe place of the Angel's tryst;
where the darkness long is only our night,
and early sun has been our closest friend
where one day alone falls before our sight
and love's beyond the beat of a heart's end;
we by silvered webs as dew-fall caught
'til this perfect first swiftly burns to slip,
to drop, to nothing but precious time sought
this the sweetest nectar share sip by sip
that others may speak of the Love-blind Fool
says they do not know the beautiful cruel
good effort 6/10,
just kidding another wonderful piece, you never let us down.
Wonderful work Nige
fabulous. I do love a proper sonnet!
Brilliant, Nigel! A truly poignant classic work...