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The Batter

Updated: Jan 31

 

He starts slowly

Leaving anything outside off-stump

Cautious

 

Forty minutes before his first  boundary

A sweet cover drive precisely placed

Confident

 

Back in his shell either side of lunch

Then a flurry of fours

Before edging to second slip

A sharp chance put down

Fortunate

 

The  next ball lands in the members area

Spilled beer and hilarity

Only the rain can stop him now

He will resume on 89

 

Determined to build a  big innings.

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Brilliant response to the challenge. Beginnings indeed.

Title fixed :-)

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Hopeful! Reminds me of going to cricket when I was a kid

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I followed the word flow... Cautious Confident Fortunate and wondered if the next word was going to be Unlucky or perhaps Inspired..


Hope the best team won!


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Jim Read
Jim Read
29 ene
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Good point, Graham! I should admit that I only wrote this poem so I could finish with a pun on beginnings

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Jim Read
Jim Read
28 ene

If anyone knows how to remove the extra T from the title please do!

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