Sands of Time
- Jarlath Busby
- Jan 5, 2024
- 1 min read
Sands of Time
Who else has trodden
Along this shore?
Footprints still to come
Those gone before
Fleeting impressions
Upon the sand
One moment in time
A speck on land
Unerring the tides
And time erase
Lost in the grey sea
The faceless haze
For life continues
Like sand in glass
Always slipping
Slipping fast
A good metaphor, well followed
Great poem well written
Thoroughly enjoyed this, the opening line hooked me, great rhythm , rolls like a the tides on an almost flat beach. Cheers mate!