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Writer's pictureJarlath Busby

Sands of Time


Sands of Time

 

Who else has trodden

Along this shore?

Footprints still to come

Those gone before

Fleeting impressions

Upon the sand

One moment in time

A speck on land

Unerring the tides

And time erase

Lost in the grey sea

The faceless haze

For life continues

Like sand in glass

Always slipping

Slipping fast

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Nieznany użytkownik
08 sty

A good metaphor, well followed

Polub

Great poem well written

Polub

Nigel Smith
Nigel Smith
06 sty

Thoroughly enjoyed this, the opening line hooked me, great rhythm , rolls like a the tides on an almost flat beach. Cheers mate!

Polub
Odpowiada osobie:

Thanks Nigel. The answer to the question posed in the first two lines, going by the photo is clearly a seagull!

Polub
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