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Sands of Time

Writer: Jarlath BusbyJarlath Busby

Sands of Time

 

Who else has trodden

Along this shore?

Footprints still to come

Those gone before

Fleeting impressions

Upon the sand

One moment in time

A speck on land

Unerring the tides

And time erase

Lost in the grey sea

The faceless haze

For life continues

Like sand in glass

Always slipping

Slipping fast

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08 ม.ค. 2567

A good metaphor, well followed

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Darrell Troon
Darrell Troon
06 ม.ค. 2567

Great poem well written

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Nigel Smith
Nigel Smith
06 ม.ค. 2567

Thoroughly enjoyed this, the opening line hooked me, great rhythm , rolls like a the tides on an almost flat beach. Cheers mate!

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Jarlath Busby
Jarlath Busby
07 ม.ค. 2567
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Thanks Nigel. The answer to the question posed in the first two lines, going by the photo is clearly a seagull!

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