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Writer's pictureKeith Trayling

Relatively Speaking by Keith Trayling

A Bad Day


Relatively speaking. I'm healthy and fit.

But with Parkinson's disease? I still feel like shit

I know other afflictions are worse.

I know I'm not stuck in a bed or a chair

I have a choice, indoors or fresh air.

But PD is still a real curse.

I'm not lonely. A loving wife and good friend.

Not many worries or many loose ends.

But energy levels are sapped everyday.

Dropped food on the floor. The dog is well pleased.

Fell over again. Another scrape on my knees.

Getting dressed, I can cause a delay.

I dribble I'm clumsy. No facial expression.

Can't remember answer when I'm asked a question.

Relatively speaking, I'm healthy and fit.

nausea in the morning, till breakfast is fixed.

Shove pills down my throat. It's still only 6.(am )

With Parkinson's disease, I still feel like shit


A Good Day


Relatively speaking, I'm healthy and fit.

Have Parkinson's disease, but only a bit.

Short tennis, table tennis, two weekly sports.

Backgammon and chess. dog walking of sorts.

Bridge with some friends. My days are all free.

A home that I love out in the country.

A garden. I enjoy growing the veg.

Going are the days of living life on the edge.

Children are grown and all doing well.

Got grandchildren too all happy as well.

A wife I love, who loves me too.

Without her, I don't know what I would do,

relatively speaking, I'm healthy and fit,

have Parkinson's disease, but only a bit.


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Alice Carroll
Alice Carroll
Feb 01, 2023

Welcome to the group. You should fit in well and add a new positive voice, perspective to the group and OMN. I'll look forward to reading your poems as well as several other poet's posts. I haven't named or given proper recognition to those other poets yet. Enjoyed all of your posts to date.

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Keith Trayling
Keith Trayling
Feb 15, 2023
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Thank you Alice, much appreciated

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Debbie Dalton
Debbie Dalton
Jan 18, 2023

great poem, it can be a struggling living with our unwanted guest !

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Alison Blevins
Alison Blevins
Jan 15, 2023

The good days, the bad days all are poetry days, thank you.

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Darrell Troon
Darrell Troon
Jan 15, 2023

We can all relate to your poem, i try to keep my glass half full. thank you for sharing

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Luisa Candela
Luisa Candela
Jan 14, 2023

It’s very nice and realistic!

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