Rum bottle grasper
bloodshot disaster
Out of sight
Under the blue sky
On bed of grass
And hidden pain
Self pity paradox
Isolation illusionist
Drunk hallucinations
Fragmented relationship
Crew member sinking
Rebellion rising
My saturated soul
Redemption none
Torturous sounds
Maliciously intended
Neighbour Rhythms
Thundering shite
Shadow looming
Too soon returned
For I go Disgraced To do or die,
Grab a glass dear
Drink with me
Of rum & ale
I like this it's hard hitting. I read the many times, building my own stories to the words .
An interesting change of style with some great word choices. Bravo