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Writer's pictureDebbie Dalton

Me, Ancient Tree



I wrote this poem 2020, it is one of my favourites


In my youth, I had sprung from the ground with a hunger

Branches outstretched challenging the wind to take me

my lovers they lay a sleeping at my feet

As I weave a colourful web of shadows over them …

On stormy days and thunder and there were some, my heart split in two

but my roots were still deep and strong within the soil


I watch the wheel of seasons come and go,

At autumn I gave, to build the magic of fire, and gave thanks for all the passion my life has felt…

Yuletide, I sparkle with white ice and silver cobwebs, my sacred space deep beneath the earth waiting

The time for spring I felt the quickening and arousal, the first kiss.

And in heat of summer, I was captivated by the sun and drink freely of the stream

And my roots were still deep within the soil


Now in my twilight years

MY arms the branches are now old and do not reach as high as I used to,

My body does not bend so free and dance with the wind.

MY leaves are Autumnal hues and falling slowly.

MY roots still deep within the soil , but I am frail now.

And quiet like a falling leaf, I will leave,

but travel nowhere

In my youth, I had sprung from the ground with a hunger

Branches outstretched challenging the wind to take me

my lovers they lay a sleeping at my feet

As I weave a colourful web of shadows over them …

On stormy days and thunder and there were some, my heart split in two

but my roots were still deep and strong within the soil


I watch the wheel of seasons come and go,

At autumn I gave, to build the magic of fire, and gave thanks for all the passion my life has felt…

Yuletide, I sparkle with white ice and silver cobwebs, my sacred space deep beneath the earth waiting

The time for spring I felt the quickening and arousal, the first kiss.

And in heat of summer, I was captivated by the sun and drink freely of the stream

And my roots were still deep within the soil


Now in my twilight years

MY arms the branches are now old and do not reach as high as I used to,

My body does not bend so free and dance with the wind.

MY leaves are Autumnal hues and falling slowly.

MY roots still deep within the soil , but I am frail now.

And quiet like a falling leaf, I will leave,

but travel nowhere

as with all ancient trees

2020

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Dawson Stafford
Dawson Stafford
Jan 19, 2023

A fantastic piece of descrptive poetry not only through the seasons but the trees emotions also😊

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Debbie Dalton
Debbie Dalton
Jan 20, 2023
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😊

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Alison Blevins
Alison Blevins
Jan 18, 2023

Beautiful descriptive poem, thank you

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Debbie Dalton
Debbie Dalton
Jan 20, 2023
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Jes Derry
Jes Derry
Jan 18, 2023

I love the imagery created by your word choice and I am a lover of trees so this was a perfect poem for me. Thank you

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Debbie Dalton
Debbie Dalton
Jan 18, 2023
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Thank you your most welcome

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