Losing it!
I am spiralling, spiralling out of control
spinning, spinning never winning
crashing, burning, diving, turning
falling,
dropping,
never stopping
I am losing it!
I am losing
I am losin
I am losi
I am los
I am lo
I am l
I am
I a
I
I
I a
I am
I am lost
Very clever and original. Whatever you’ve lost, it’s not your poetic gift. Inspiring.
Lost and found, You are so talented.
Things can sometimes overwhelm us and I’m sure we have all felt like this at some point. A very descriptive piece, short but hard hitting, well done!!
You are not alone here…and your words of encouragement to others are always appreciated.
Stay strong and keep writing and remember that old saying….”I shake therefore I am “
Smart poem. Fun to read.
I hope the butterflies come to the rescue. You are certainly not lost as a writer - more of an inspiration and an encouragement to me, and I'm sure to others, with your invariably thoughtful and generous comments. Keep flying high!