Jul 171 min read

losing it!

Updated: Jul 28

Losing it!

I am spiralling, spiralling out of control

spinning, spinning never winning

crashing, burning, diving, turning

falling,

dropping,

never stopping

I am losing it!

I am losing

I am losin

I am losi

I am los

I am lo

I am l

I am

I a

I am

I am lost

8 Comments

Jarlath Busby

Jul 25

Very clever and original. Whatever you’ve lost, it’s not your poetic gift. Inspiring.

Martin Pickard

Jul 22

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Lost and found, You are so talented.

markcrump2010

Jul 20

Things can sometimes overwhelm us and I’m sure we have all felt like this at some point. A very descriptive piece, short but hard hitting, well done!!

You are not alone here…and your words of encouragement to others are always appreciated.

Stay strong and keep writing and remember that old saying….”I shake therefore I am “

Edited

Alison Blevins

Jul 20

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Replying to

Thanks Mark, I will remember that.🙂

Alice Carroll

Jul 18

Smart poem. Fun to read.

John Wood

Jul 18

I hope the butterflies come to the rescue. You are certainly not lost as a writer - more of an inspiration and an encouragement to me, and I'm sure to others, with your invariably thoughtful and generous comments. Keep flying high!

Alison Blevins

Jul 20

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Replying to

Thank you John, your kind words are much appreciated.