Different paths in life we take
Each hoping that it will make
A life we'll find forfilling
But what we know when our light goes out
Would be a help there is no doubt
If we knew it at the beginning
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Different paths in life we take
Each hoping that it will make
A life we'll find forfilling
But what we know when our light goes out
Would be a help there is no doubt
If we knew it at the beginning
Brilliant
Concise, enigmatic, just the right amount of opacity, emotion and intellect triggered, just how I like a poem to b, Thank you mate.
A thoughtful piece. If hindsight became foresight would our lives become a non event and boring? Its those risks and mistakes that consitiutes a life..............🤔
Interesting, is hindsight then foresight ? 😉
Wise words and so very true. Light hearted and a delightful piece.