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Writer's pictureKeith Trayling

Good Days and Bad

Updated: Oct 30

If anyone says to me once more,

When I meet them in the street.

"You're looking good, you couldn't tell,

You're out and about, you're on your feet."


Inside I'll scream , their words well meant.

There's thirty symptoms on the list.

Shakes and tremors are just one.

Got the T-Shirt. I've Parkinsons, I am not pissed.


Want to know just how I am?

Ask my wife, my next of kin,

Who sees me daily, good and bad.

Copes with the state I can get in.


An insidious condition,

I want to rant and rave,

But Parkinnsons, that uninvited guest,

You're with me to the grave.


I write these lines not for sympathy,

There's multitudes worse off than me.

Life's a stage and we all act.

It's just today I'm feeling trapped.

Sometimes a hill too hard to climb.

So tomorrow when I greet,

Someone else out in the street.

I'll smile and say I'm doing fine.


But not today.



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Hang in there and Thank you! No more words needed.. 💕

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One of my lines is

" I'm now reduced to toddler talk,

Have you been? How well you walk"

What resonates with me is your line

"You're looking good, you couldn't tell,

You're out and about, you're on your feet."

You rang so many bells. Thank you


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I think most of us try to bottle up how we really feel,

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