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Empathy Running on Empty

Writer's picture: Jarlath BusbyJarlath Busby

Empathy Running on Empty

 

You said you ran out of petrol

on the way to your forest run.

Not seeing the wood

for the trees I said.

 

You said you had to freewheel

back down the hill to the garage.

Necessity is the mother

of invention I said.

 

You said the petrol pumps were busy

when you had passed them.

A stitch in time

saves nine I said.

 

You said the queues were massive

and you were late.

The early bird

gets the worm I said.

 

Fail to prepare and prepare

to fail I said.

You said I was

a sanctimonious prick.

 

Profanity is the effort of

a feeble brain I said.

You knew I was right because

you said nothing.

 

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markcrump2010
markcrump2010
5 days ago

I enjoyed this Very much,very funny, however, ladies can remember every time we’ve upset them since 1976, so you should be on your guard for at least the next 10 years or so ….. verse four reminds me of a great line by Les Barker who said “the early bird gets the worm, but it is the second mouse that gets the cheese, “. Wise words ndeed.

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Martin Pickard
Martin Pickard
6 days ago

Love it. Who needs empathy when platitudes will do?

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Keith Trayling
Keith Trayling
6 days ago

Your on thin ice with the missus, very brave! Love the structure,nice one

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I do like this! Couplet pairs into the bargain...

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Jarlath Busby
Jarlath Busby
2月13日
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Thank you Stephen. Thought it might be fun to imagine a scenario with an imperfect pair.

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