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Disentwined

Writer's picture: Graham PitcherGraham Pitcher

Updated: Jan 15




This Night of bliss

Love’s perfect kiss

Oh, how I’ll miss..

Your warm embrace

Our special place

Oh, how I’ll face..

Those hours ahead

Loves lonely bed

Oh, how I’ll thread..

True lovers knot

Forget me not

Oh, how I’ll plot

To keep you near

I Love you dear

Oh, how I’ll fear

Night's shift to day

Dark steals away

Oh, how I’ll pray

It's not the end

Loves knotty friend

So, now I’ll end

Disentwined

Love to find

Never mind!


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She loves me, she loves me knot, she loves me.....❤️ 💔 ❤️


Is this the essence of Aubade....?

Thích

I agree with Martin. Love the imagery and title. But was depressed after reading it. Suppose that is why I write funny poems. My spouse is left-brained mathematician, not in knot theory. Such is my world.

Thích

Keith Trayling
Keith Trayling
21 thg 1

I agree with previous comments, well written

Thích

Martin Pickard
Martin Pickard
16 thg 1

I like the imagery of the knot - tangled limbs, tangled lives, the difficulties of love

Thích

Thanks Alison

I've rewritten part x

Thích
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