knotted cables seek release
anxious batteries await the call
heartbroken pencils long to be held
the ipod won’t come out to play
and just like me
the remote is going spare
but cannot adapt
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knotted cables seek release
anxious batteries await the call
heartbroken pencils long to be held
the ipod won’t come out to play
and just like me
the remote is going spare
but cannot adapt
Clever anthropomorphisms. Great fun to read and recite
Succinct, poignant super wee poem.
Nice!, you went in through the side door, mate.
Short and bitter-sweet. A fine poem.
I like it. Very clever and thoughtfully constructed. Short but effective because of its brevity. Very good. I must explore the idea of similar images myself!