I am on fire
I’m in a bad place
Smokey space
Lungs intoxicated
No clean air
But I am determined to get out of here
I’m on fire
Literally burning
Survival in question
But even that suggestion
Energises my soul
Living is my goal and I’m…
On fire
Desire to be in a better place
Will not let my existence go to waste
Will battle on
Wilfully strong
I’m broken and hurt
Alert to danger
No stranger to pain
I’m….on fire
Heat in my bones
In my brain
Will tame the flames
I will get out of here and rise
Like a phoenix
Smashing out of the ashes
I will be victorious
In this glorious life
I will fight, will not tire
Because I’m …
On fire
Wonderful as always, fast and furious I could feel the sparks
A clever write Liz, it reads like a slam to me, I read it with increasing speed, yet conversely ever more involved, so by the time I come to;
Will not let my existence go to waste
Will battle on
Wilfully strong,
I'm feeling immolation. and then the phoenix, So many threads and deeper thought on this one may bring up ideas beyond the obvious. Thank you
Wonderful though I now have Springsteen running through my head like a freight train in the middle of the night!
You are on fire!! Maybe keep a bucket of water next to your writing area for your own safety.
Excellent work, a positive attitude works wonders , keep it up.
You were on fire when you wrote that!