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Writer's pictureJohn Dallison

Bliss?

I've had a long dream of perfect bliss,

That was more sublime than any lover's kiss.

Nirvana or Heaven? I could not tell -

There were no great dieties,

Yet it was the very opposite of Hell.


No angels, archetypes or elysian fields.

The inhabitants were ordinary, every-day folk

Who smiled benignly as we spoke...


I felt refreshed and happy when I woke.

Then doubt pushed in -

Had my sweet dream merely been

Some Dopamine-connected hoax -

My vile Id's cruelest joke?


Today plods on with deadly pace

My negativity, a pale disgrace.

For this weak lapse, should I be shriven?

'Forgiven, young man - you are forgiven!'






















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Unknown member
Jan 16, 2023

Escape into poetry and the company of poets, bliss is hiding here

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John Dallison
John Dallison
Jan 17, 2023
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😉The people in my dream were 'Parkies'!


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Alison Blevins
Alison Blevins
Jan 15, 2023

The joy of uninterrupted sleep and sweet dreams conflicted with reality - you have captured this in a bitter-sweet poem indeed.

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