This elephant has many parts,
yet blind-born men, with feeling, fight;
for each from their experience
know beyond doubt that they are right.
‘Thick, like a tree branch; explains one
stood proud, beside the trunk, alone.
At other end the man turned tail,
declared this beast more rope-like, snake.
‘Here in my palm I hold a fan’
proclaimed the man who handled ear.
‘No, pillar’, he who grasped the leg;
beside, the oldest said ‘a wall’.
Distracted from their village view -
these codgers flailing, certain, dark -
till girl suggests they each try hear
each other, insight, learn again.
For five assured - but all were wrong,
content with what was partial sight,
as in the gloom, theologise -
discover truths in larger rooms.
Magnificent, though far the drop,
almighty fallen from conceit,
imagination of their hearts,
while meek and lowly risen up.
And pachyderm remembers well -
the earth is full of knowing folk:
they built a tower, those babblers sure,
until some heard a little kid.
This cow, eyes small, yet deep brown seas,
an object lesson, visual aid,
stood mourning for poor grace displayed,
and waited, timeless, for the dawn.
Love this fable and as always you have incorporated it beautifully into your poem.
I was so looking forward to your reply to this challenge Stephen, also intrigued. As always with your writing I was hooked from the 'off'. This is a brilliant piece , fable, Storytelling, poetry just wonderful!
🤔Beautiful and wry, your metaphor for our human condition and the dawn of reason... Love this!