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Jon Best
Jon Best
Apr 16, 2023

I like this it gives us a furtive look just like the poem describes

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Darrell Troon
Darrell Troon
Apr 16, 2023

The days first light fears nothing, it has seen it all before. This got me thinking 🤔

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Jes Derry
Jes Derry
Apr 16, 2023

”open armed sweep” and ”peep show glimpses” my favourites in this clever write.

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Stephen Kingsnorth
Stephen Kingsnorth
Apr 16, 2023

I need the rest of the story, dormer, fanlight, sash, bricked up... perhaps the start of May challenge framed?

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