following our workshop on odes I was inspired to write this...
I have a little tummy
it sticks out quite a bit
I used to really hate it
when I looked at it.
I always felt self conscious
and tried to suck it in
hoping no one would notice
and wishing I was thin.
But now I am much older
I’ve come to realise
I did not appreciate my tummy
nor its lack of size
because now it’s not so little,
its more of a bulgy belly -
plus its very soft and squishy,
and it wobbles like a jelly.
But I am also so much wiser
and know how helpful it can be
for it protected both my babies
whilst they lived inside of me
and the fact its soft and squishy
is really just the norm,
it’s a beautiful wee belly
and I should appreciate its form.
So I will no longer shun my tummy,
suck it in, or cover up -
but enjoy it in its glory
and shower it with love.
Belly dancers - highly prized! Alice and Paulette cover the gist, I'll add the simple rhyme scheme, or rhyme in general , for, me is very effective. Men can also change shape, I currently would describe myself as looking like I've swallowed a Space-hopper!
Shows good self-esteem to accept your body as it is. Good work!!
Your ode to your tummy covers all of the life cycles. Worth sharing it with everyone, not just Parkies. I enjoyed it very much.
Wonderful, I love it!