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Debbie Dalton
Debbie Dalton
Feb 10, 2023

wow, did not see that coming. great read

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Nigel Smith
Nigel Smith
Feb 10, 2023

Lovely vignette, great contrast between the two nameless characters, sort of piece that can generate great discussion, life and dark, good and bad, eternal duality. cheers buddy!

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Darrell Troon
Darrell Troon
Feb 10, 2023
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Thank you for recognising it as Vignette, I wrote this after my attempt at Haiku and the comments I asked you for. A vignette is what I was hoping to achieve.

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Alison Blevins
Alison Blevins
Feb 09, 2023

Wow, that is darkly good.

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